Black Ghost

*ahem* Goal + Obstacle = Conflict *ahem* *gag* MM

Those look really cool! But alas, I don't have a few hundred dollars to spend. Oh well. :(

I envy you. When do you get the time to write so much? :D But seriously, it sounds as if things are going well, and I hope Tears turns out ...

Ah, but that's not an infodump, it's description, which works beautifully when done right.

Yeah, there are good and bad infodumps...although most of the time they're bad. XD

Maybe if you take the time to consider what kind of society your character's live in, maybe you could base your decision on the types of rights each sex has, ...

That's pretty cool, even though it's a rejection letter. But from the look of the letter it seems like they gave it pretty strong consideration, so great job. :) -Tony

Seriously, who wrote these? :?

Well basically, my dilemma comes from the plot. I can't decide what would be more exciting/relevant to the reader: the events as they unfold before Molly? Or as they happen ...

VIEWPOINTS ARE ANNOYING: Alright, The Oil Mark is getting on my nerves as far as viewpoints go. It's in third person, yes, but I can't seem to decide who to ...

Thanks for the encouragment, Kitty15. I've also done some thinking and figure it's okay to have more than one writing project at play, so I went ahead and added all ...

In other words it's very bad for a story. :(

When I first started I would run and show my parents every little thing I would jot down...even though it was absolute crap. And now when I'm capable of writing ...

I've had quite a few novel ideas since I began writing, some good, some painfully bad, but out of the mess I've managed to pursue a few choice projects that ...

Nice!